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Could a flower thrive
In darkness?
I think it could be done...
A pretty blossom,
Locked away,
Without the warmth of sun.
Forced to feed
Upon itself--
To nourish its own soul.
A living,
Breathing
Testament
To being truly whole.
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copyright AHCaffrey, 2007
2 comments:
It's a strong image with a very nice structure. I see a gorgeous blossom on a frail, delicate stem.
A title is not immediately coming to me.
Jason:
I pictured a very colorful blossom, too -- something that was growing despite its dreary surroundings.
I also had in my mind the image of a child who had not been encouraged by his/her parents in any way but managed to thrive in the figurative darkness.
Thanks for your ideas!
Angelique
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